2022年高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí):短文改錯專項突破練習(xí)題匯編短文改錯(一)A(2021·江西南昌市高三一模)Virtuesarejewelofgreatprice.Ifindhonestyismostvaluablevirtueinmyheart.Anditisalwaysaccompanymygrowth.Asachild,IwasconstantlytoldthestorynamingTheWolfIsComing,whichobviouslyhasalastinginfluence.Overtime,I’veincreasingrealizedtheimportanceofhonestyandtrytocarryitout.OnlythenI’mhonestandreliablewillIbetrustedwithothers.Actuallybeinghonest,I’vefounditmoreeasiertomakefriends.Thevirtueofhonestywillhelpmeopenthedoortosuccessofourcareerandlife.B(2021·寧夏銀川一中高三下學(xué)期第三次模擬)LastMonday,Iwasinformedtohostthegraduationceremonywithoneofmyclassmateinourschoolhall.Facedsuchagreatopportunity,webothfeelexcited.Inordertomaketheceremonysuccessful,sowemadeenoughpreparationsforit.Theyarrangedtheprogrammes,gotfamiliarwiththewordsandpractisedalottogether.WhenIgotonthestage,Iwassonervous,beyondmycontrol,whichImadethemistake.Whatanembarrassedmoment!Justthen,Inoticedmyteachersmilingatme.Becausehisencouragement,Icalmeddownandeverythingworkedoutsmoothasexpected.C(2021·安徽馬鞍山市高三一模)Likemanyboys,mymostfavoritesportisbasketball.Tobehonest,IfeltclumsywhenIfirstlearntoplayit.ImovedmoreslowlyandIwasnotasstronglyasothers.Buttheydidn’tgiveupandspentmysparetimepracticing.Gradually,Imadeprogresses.Ican’tforgethowexcitingIwasbeforewinningthefirstmatch.That’showIfellinlovebasketball.Sincethen,ithasbecomeaimportantpartofmylife.Itstrengthensmybodybutalsohelpsmebecomeconfident.D(2021·黑龍江齊齊哈爾市高三一模)IwasridingmybikedowntothecornershopinaSaturdaymorningwhenIattractedbyacuteboywhowaswalkinghisdog.Suddenlymyneighbourdrivespastandhonked(按喇叭)atme.IwassosurprisingthatIcrashedintoanoldladywalkdownthestreet!Lucky,theoldladywasn’thurt,butIfelloffmybikeandlandedinthehole.Myneighboursawmetofallsoshestoppedhercarandrushedouttohelpher.Theworstpartwasthatthecuteboystoppedtowatchallhappen.Whatanembarrassingbutdangerousday!短文改錯(二)A(2021·河南省鄭州市高中畢業(yè)年級第二次質(zhì)量預(yù)測)Theotherdaythemembersofourschool’sEnglishclubtaketheexchangestudentsintheirschooltovisittheCityCulturalCenter.Duringthevisit,theyappreciatedlargepictureexhibitionofourrichlocalcultureandsomeuniqueformofourlocalarts.However,theywatchedavideoabouttheachievementswehadmadeinthepastfew第26頁共26頁
centuries.Theexchangestudentswereallamazedatourcolorculture,sayingthatthevisitwasreallyabigculturalfeastwiththem.Thevisitwasagreatlysuccessandtheywerequitesatisfiedwithit.Itwasnotonlyenrichedtheexchangestudents’life,butalsohelpedthemlearningmoreaboutChineseculture.B(2021·寧夏石嘴山市高考二模)WhenIwassmall,myparentssentmetoboardingschool.IfeltveryhomesickthatIcriedallthetime.LonelyanddepressingIfailedtocontinuestudyingthereandreturnedbackhome.Luckily,whenIwasinhighschool,Igetpopularamongmyclassmate.Once,ourschoolorganizedatwo-weekstayincountryside.Again,Iwasawayfromhome,withoutparents,withoutyummyfood,evenwithoutahotshower.Tomyhappy,everybodywascaringandeverythingmademefeelathome.Whatgreatthechangewas!Whenthetripwasover,myparentstoldme,“You’vealreadygrowingup!”IknowI’llbeawayandgoafteryourdreams,buthomewillalwaysremaininmyheart.C(2021·河南省鄭州市高中畢業(yè)年級第三次質(zhì)量預(yù)測)ThisweekItookpartinaknowledgecompetitionontheSilkRoadwasheldinourschool,whichgavemeagreatsenseforachievement.OnMonday,aposter,whichannouncedthecompetition,attractingmyattention.Iimmediatelysignupforit.Afewdayslater,Iparticipatedthefirstroundofthecompetition,adifficultwrittentest.Sincethereweremanycompetitors,Isucceededinenteringthefinal.Itwasheldthismorningandonthestageinthehall,Iansweredmostofthequestionsaccurate.Finally,Iwonout!WheninterviewingbytheschoolTVstation,Iexpressedmyproudinoursplendidculture.Thecompetitionnotonlybroadenedmyknowledgesbutalsoencouragedmetolearnmoreaboutourowncultureinthefuture.D(2021·河南六市高三一模)BecauseoftheCOVID-19pandemic,peoplearerequiredtowearingmasksonbusesinChina.However,oneday,IforgettowearonewhenIwasheadingforavitalexam.Whileboardingthebus,Istoppedbythedriver.RealizingwhatIwouldbelatefortheexam,Inearlyburstintotear.Justatthattime,anoldladyhandedmewithamask,tellingmenottoworry.Thankstohispreciousgift,Iwasfinalintimefortheexam.Notonlydoesthemaskshowourgreatqualitiestohelpeachotherinfaceofgreatdanger,butitalsorepresentedtheChinesepeople’sdeterminationtopreventbutcontrolthepandemic.短文改錯(三)A(2021·江西省宜豐中學(xué)高三一模)IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijing2022WinterOlympicGamesisneeded.I’mwritingtoapplytothisposition.AsanativeofBeijing,IthinkitisaprivilegeanddutyformetoofferthebestvoluntaryservicetoourforeignguestsandmeanwhilepromotingChineseculture.IbelieveI’mequallytothejob.IhavegoodcommandofEnglishandI’mconfidentingivingplayersguidanceandhelpasrequiring.What’smore,Ihaveaknowledgeofwintersports,whichtheywillprovehelpfulincommunicatingwithplayers.However,Ihavebeeninvolvedinseveralinternationalexchangeprograms,butenjoyspreadingourculturetoforeigners.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetheopportunities.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yourssincerely,第26頁共26頁
LiHuaB(2021·安徽示范高中皖北協(xié)作區(qū)高三一模)DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?TherewillhaveanEnglishspeechcontestnextweek,thatIplantogetinvolvedin.SoI’mwritingtoyouforhelp.I,borninAnhuiandneverexposedtoEnglish-speakingcountries,havethepoorcommandofspeakingskillsinpublic.What’sworst,Iamafraidofmakinggrammaticalmistakeswhenitcomestodeliveraspeech.Muchtorelief,Icanseekyourhelp.Hopefully,youwillbekindenoughtohelpwithmypronounce.AreyouavailableinthisSaturday?Ifso,let’smetat9o’clockinourclassroom.Yourkindhelpwillbehighappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHuaC(2021·河南省洛陽市高三年級第三次統(tǒng)一考試(三模))MygrandpalikesPekingOpera.Inthepast,IoftensawhimwatchinglotsofsuchprogramonTV.However,sincelastyear,hehadbeguntolearntosingPekingOperaonthephone.Whenhegotasmartphonesendbymyfather,Igottheideaforteachinghimhowtouseit.IinstructedhertoturnonthephoneandwatchedthevideosofPekingOpera.Atthefirst,hecouldnotfollowme,buthelistenedwithgreatcareful.Itaughthimpatientlyandhelearneduseitatlast.Nownotonlycanheenjoythevideos,andhecansingPekingOperawell.D(2021·云南省昆明市高三“三診一?!泵自\斷測試(二模))October12thwasbigdayformyteamandme.WetakepartinabasketballtournamentforseniorstudentsinLancasterCounty.Someplayerswereabsentbecausehehadtotakeexams.What’sworse,therewasnosubstitute.Theteamwhatweplayedagainstwaslastyear’stopone.Asastriker,Iplayedhardly.Later,IhadlittleenergythanbeforeandgotinjuredbecauseofIfelldown.Duringthepause,thecoachtoldusto“playwitheffortbutwisdom”.Then,Isavedmystrengthandlookedforgoodchancestoscoringmoregoals.Finally,Iscoredanotherfourpointandwasnamedthe“mostvaluableplayer.”短文改錯(四)A(2021·四川省南充市高三下學(xué)期第三次適應(yīng)性考試)Ispentaunforgettablewintervacationthisyear,duringwhatIbecameanindependentlearner.Inthebeginningofthevacation,Imadeadetailedlearningplan.Withaclearaiminmymind,hewasalwaysinhighspiritseveryday.Tomydelighted,Icouldcarryouttheplanstrictly.WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,andIturnedtomyteachersandclassmatesforhelpthroughtheInternet.Thankstotheconvenientvideochatapp,Icouldgetmyproblemssolveintime.Gradual,Igainedmoreconfidenceinmyweaksubjects.Also,Ihadagreatsenseofaccomplishmentasmyindependentlearningabilitymastered.B(2021·四川省達州市普通高中第二次診斷性測試)Michael,whonowstudiedinourschool,ismygoodfriend.OnthemorningoflastSaturdayheaskedme第26頁共26頁
spendtheweekendtogetherwithhimself.Itwassuchfineweatherthatwehaddecidedtohangaroundinthetown.Therewerelotsofpeoplewalkhereandthere.Michaellookedinterestingineverythinghesaw.Threehourswentbybeforewebothfelthungrily,butalltherestaurantwerefullofguests.Toourexcitement,wewereabouttogiveupwhiletwoguestsroseandleft.Weimmediatelysatdownforourlunchandaboutanhourlaterwetookthetaxihome.C(2021·黑龍江高三一模)DearDavid,Iwasexcitedtoknowyoulikemusicfromyourletter.NeitherdoI.Asweallknow,musicisanimportantpartofourlifetoday.Noonewillsaynotomusicandeverybodyhastheirtasteaboutthemusic.WhenIwasveryyoung,myparentswouldencouragemelistentoclassicmusic.Theywantedtodeveloptheirinterestandgoodtaste.SoasIgrowup,Ifallinloveforrockmusic,whichmakesmefeelcool.Itissaidthatmusiccanhealpeople’ssouls.Whilelisteningtosomepeacefulmusic,Iamsurprisingcalm.WhenIamnothappy,Iwilllistentomusicandthendancetoitinmybedroom.Musiccanhelpmeforgetsomethingannoyed.It’sgreatthatwesharethesamehobbies.Musicisfullofcharm.CouldyouintroducesomeniceEnglishsongsinyournextletter?Yours,LiMingD(2021·江西贛州市高三一模)Inordertocelebratetheeightyanniversaryofthefoundingofourschool,abigcelebrationwasheldinourschoollastSunday.Alltheteachersandstudentsattendedaceremony.Fullpreparationswerebeingmadeinadvance.Wedecorateourschoolwithflowersandballoons,butwepreparedsomeeye-catchingprograms.Finally,thedaywehadbeenlookingforwardcame.Inthemorning,theopeningceremonywasheldontheplaygroundasscheduling.Afterthat,theyattendedaspecialclassmeeting.Intheevening,theteachersandstudentsgavedifferentkindsofwonderfulperformance.IwashappilythatIjoinedinthechorusofourschoolsong.第26頁共26頁
參考答案與試題解析短文改錯(一)A(2021·江西南昌市高三一模)Virtuesarejewelofgreatprice.Ifindhonestyismostvaluablevirtueinmyheart.Anditisalwaysaccompanymygrowth.Asachild,IwasconstantlytoldthestorynamingTheWolfIsComing,whichobviouslyhasalastinginfluence.Overtime,I’veincreasingrealizedtheimportanceofhonestyandtrytocarryitout.OnlythenI’mhonestandreliablewillIbetrustedwithothers.Actuallybeinghonest,I’vefounditmoreeasiertomakefriends.Thevirtueofhonestywillhelpmeopenthedoortosuccessofourcareerandlife.【答案】 Virtuesareofgreatprice.Ifindhonestyismostvaluablevirtueinmyheart.Anditisalwaysmygrowth.Asachild,IwasconstantlytoldthestoryTheWolfIsComing,whichobviouslyhasalastinginfluence.Overtime,I’verealizedtheimportanceofhonestyandtocarryitout.OnlyI’mhonestandreliablewillIbetrustedothers.Actuallybeinghonest,I’vefounditmoreeasiertomakefriends.Thevirtueofhonestywillhelpmeopenthedoortosuccessofcareerandlife.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。主要講述了誠實的重要性。1.考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意:美德是高價的珠寶。分析句子可知,文章第一句話jewel前用的是are,且jewel(寶石)是可數(shù)名詞,因此使用復(fù)數(shù)形式j(luò)ewels。故將jewel改為jewels。2.考查固定搭配。句意:我發(fā)現(xiàn)誠實是我心中最寶貴的美德。形容詞最高級前應(yīng)使用定冠詞the。故在most前加the。3.考查非謂語動詞。句意:它一直陪伴著我的成長。分析句子可知,這里表示一直做某事,使用現(xiàn)在進行時態(tài),且主語it與accompany之間為主動關(guān)系,因此使用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。故將accompany改為accompanying。4.考查非謂語動詞。句意:小時候,我經(jīng)常被告知一個名為《狼來了》的故事,這顯然具有持久的影響力。分析句子可知,這里指名叫《狼來了》的故事,name意為命名,這里邏輯主語story與name之間為被動關(guān)系,因此使用過去分詞作后置定語。故將naming改為named。第26頁共26頁
5.考查副詞。句意:我越來越意識到誠實的重要性。分析句子可知,這里使用副詞作狀語修飾動詞realize。故將increasing改為increasingly。6.考查動詞時態(tài)。句意:隨著時間的流逝,我越來越意識到誠實的重要性,并努力實現(xiàn)它。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,and連接兩個并列謂語動詞,前一個是haverealized,后一個是(have)tried,have承前省略了。故將try改為tried。7.考查倒裝句。句意:只有當我誠實可靠,別人才會信任我。分析句子可知,onlyif是固定搭配意為“只有”,位于句首,主句使用部分倒裝。故將then改為if。8.考查固定搭配和被動語態(tài)。句意:只有誠實守信,我才能得到他人的信任。分析句子可知,被別人信任應(yīng)表述為betrustedbysb.,使用被動語態(tài)形式。故將with改為by。9.考查形容詞比較級。句意:我發(fā)現(xiàn)結(jié)交朋友比較容易。分析句子可知,一般形容詞的比較級在后面加er,這里“easier”譯為“更容易”,不需要在前面加上more來修飾,大多數(shù)雙音節(jié)、三音節(jié)以及三音節(jié)以上的形容詞采用“more+原級”構(gòu)成比較級形式。故將more去掉。10.考查物主代詞。句意:誠實的美德將幫助我打開事業(yè)和生活成功之門。分析句子可知,文章最后一句話中用的是“willhelpme”,則后面也要用“mycareerandlife”與之對應(yīng)。故將our改為my。B(2021·寧夏銀川一中高三下學(xué)期第三次模擬)LastMonday,Iwasinformedtohostthegraduationceremonywithoneofmyclassmateinourschoolhall.Facedsuchagreatopportunity,webothfeelexcited.Inordertomaketheceremonysuccessful,sowemadeenoughpreparationsforit.Theyarrangedtheprogrammes,gotfamiliarwiththewordsandpractisedalottogether.WhenIgotonthestage,Iwassonervous,beyondmycontrol,whichImadethemistake.Whatanembarrassedmoment!Justthen,Inoticedmyteachersmilingatme.Becausehisencouragement,Icalmeddownandeverythingworkedoutsmoothasexpected.【答案】 LastMonday,Iwasinformedtohostthegraduationceremonywithoneofmyinourschoolhall.suchagreatopportunity,webothexcited.Inordertomaketheceremonysuccessful,sowemadeenoughpreparationsforit.arrangedtheprogrammes,gotfamiliarwiththewordsandpractisedalottogether.WhenIgotonthestage,Iwassonervous,beyondmycontrol,Imademistake.Whatanmoment!Justthen,Inoticedmyteachersmilingatme.Becausehisencouragement,Icalmeddownandeverythingworkedoutasexpected.第26頁共26頁
【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。主要講述了作者和同學(xué)一起主持畢業(yè)典禮,結(jié)果作者因為太緊張犯了一個錯誤,多虧了老師的鼓勵,作者冷靜下來,讓一切都順利進行。1.考查名詞的數(shù)。句意:上周一,我被告知要和我的一位同學(xué)在學(xué)校禮堂主持畢業(yè)典禮。classmate為可數(shù)名詞,此處為“oneof+復(fù)數(shù)名詞”結(jié)構(gòu),classmate應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。故將classmate改為classmates。2.考查非謂語動詞。句意:面對這樣一個非常好的機會,我們都感到很興奮。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知face在句中應(yīng)用非謂語動詞形式,與邏輯主語we構(gòu)成主動關(guān)系,故應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。故將Faced改為Facing。3.考查動詞時態(tài)。句意:面對這樣一個非常好的機會,我們都感到很興奮。結(jié)合上文可知事情發(fā)生在上周一,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將feel改為felt。4.考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。句意:為了使儀式順利舉行,我們做了充分的準備。此處為簡單句,前后不存在因果關(guān)系,不需要連詞so。故刪除so。5.考查代詞人稱。句意:我們安排節(jié)目,熟悉單詞,一起練習(xí)。此處指“我和我的同學(xué)”應(yīng)用代詞we。故將They改為We。6.考查狀語從句。句意:當我上了舞臺,我太緊張了,無法控制,以至于我犯了一個錯誤。表示“如此……以至于……”引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句應(yīng)用so...that...。故將which改為that。7.考查冠詞。句意:當我上了舞臺,我太緊張了,無法控制,所以我犯了一個錯誤。mistake此處為泛指,應(yīng)用不定冠詞,且mistake是發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭的單詞,應(yīng)用a。故將the改為a。8.考查形容詞。句意:多么令人尷尬的時刻!修飾名詞moment應(yīng)用-ing結(jié)尾形容詞embarrassing,表示“令人尷尬的”。故將embarrassed改為embarrassing。9.考查固定短語。句意:因為他的鼓勵,我冷靜下來,一切都如預(yù)期的順利進行。后跟名詞encouragement作賓語,表示“因為”應(yīng)用短語becauseof;because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句,后跟句子。故在Because后加上of。10.考查副詞。句意:因為他的鼓勵,我冷靜下來,一切都如預(yù)期的順利進行。修飾動詞短語workout應(yīng)用副詞smoothly,作狀語。故將smooth改為smoothly。C(2021·安徽馬鞍山市高三一模)Likemanyboys,mymostfavoritesportisbasketball.Tobehonest,IfeltclumsywhenIfirstlearntoplayit.ImovedmoreslowlyandIwasnotasstronglyasothers.Buttheydidn’tgiveupandspentmysparetimepracticing.Gradually,Imadeprogresses.Ican’tforgethowexcitingIwasbeforewinningthefirstmatch.That’showIfellinlovebasketball.Sincethen,ithasbecomeaimportantpartofmylife.Itstrengthensmybodybutalsohelpsmebecomeconfident.【答案】 Likemanyboys,mymostfavoritesportisbasketball.Tobehonest,IfeltclumsywhenI第26頁共26頁
firsttoplayit.ImovedmoreslowlyandIwasnotasasothers.Butdidn’tgiveupandspentmysparetimepracticing.Gradually,Imade.Ican’tforgethowIwaswinningthefirstmatch.That’showIfellinlovebasketball.Sincethen,ithasbecomeimportantpartofmylife.Itstrengthensmybodyalsohelpsmebecomeconfident.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。“我”愛上了籃球,籃球增強了“我”的身體,讓“我”更自信。1.考查形容詞。句意:像許多男孩一樣,我最喜歡的運動是籃球。favorite意為“最喜愛的”本身為最高級,所以不需要再用most。故將favorite前的most去掉。2.考查時態(tài)。句意:老實說,我第一次學(xué)籃球的時候覺得自己很笨。根據(jù)Ifeltclumsy可知,此處應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將learn改為learned/learnt。3.考查形容詞。句意:我移動得較慢,也不像別人那么強壯。在was后作表語應(yīng)用形容詞。故將strongly改為strong。4.考查人稱代詞。句意:但我沒有放棄,把業(yè)余時間花在練習(xí)上。根據(jù)mysparetime可知,此處是指“我”沒有放棄。故將they改為I。5.考查不可數(shù)名詞。句意:漸漸地,我取得了進步。progress為不可數(shù)名詞,所以沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將progresses改為progress。6.考查形容詞。句意:我無法忘記贏得第一場比賽后我是多么的激動。根據(jù)“winningthefirstmatch”可知此處是指“我”很激動。故將exciting改為excited。7.考查介詞。句意:我無法忘記贏得第一場比賽后我是多么的激動。根據(jù)“Ican’tforgethowexcitedIwas”可知,此處是指在贏得第一場比賽后。故將before改為after。8.考查固定搭配和介詞。句意:我就是這樣愛上籃球的。fallinlovewith...表示“愛上……”,為固定搭配。故在basketball前加with。9.考查不定冠詞。句意:從那時起,它就成了我生活中重要的一部分。part為可數(shù)名詞,important的開頭發(fā)音是元音,所以應(yīng)用an。故將a改為an。10.考查連詞。句意:它增強了我的身體,也幫助我變得自信?!皊trengthensmybody”和“helpsmebecomeconfident”是并列關(guān)系。故將but改為and。D(2021·黑龍江齊齊哈爾市高三一模)IwasridingmybikedowntothecornershopinaSaturdaymorningwhenIattractedbyacuteboywhowaswalkinghisdog.Suddenlymyneighbourdrivespastandhonked(按喇叭)atme.IwassosurprisingthatIcrashedintoanoldladywalkdownthestreet!Lucky,theoldladywasn’thurt,butIfelloffmybikeandlandedinthehole.Myneighboursawmetofallsoshestoppedhercarandrushedouttohelpher.Theworstpartwasthatthecuteboystoppedtowatch第26頁共26頁
allhappen.Whatanembarrassingbutdangerousday!【答案】 IwasridingmybikedowntothecornershopaSaturdaymorningwhenIattractedbyacuteboywhowaswalkinghisdog.Suddenlymyneighbourpastandhonked(按喇叭)atme.IwassothatIcrashedintoanoldladydownthestreet!,theoldladywasn’thurt,butIfelloffmybikeandlandedinhole.Myneighboursawmetofallsoshestoppedhercarandrushedouttohelp.Theworstpartwasthatthecuteboystoppedtowatchallhappen.Whatanembarrassingdangerousday!【解析】 本文是一篇記敘文。文章講述了一個星期六的早晨,作者騎著自行車去街角的商店,不小心摔倒的故事。1.考查介詞。句意:一個星期六的早晨,我騎著我的自行車去街角的商店,這時我被一個正在遛狗的可愛男孩吸引住了。表示在具體哪一天或怎么樣的早上,使用介詞on。故將in改為on。2.考查動詞時態(tài)及語態(tài)。句意:一個星期六的早晨,我騎著我的自行車去街角的商店,這時我被一個正在遛狗的可愛男孩吸引住了。根據(jù)語境可知,此處描述的是過去的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時,attract與主語I是被動關(guān)系,應(yīng)用一般過去時的被動語態(tài)。故在I后加was。3.考查動詞時態(tài)。句意:突然,我的鄰居開車經(jīng)過,對著我按喇叭。根據(jù)語境可知,此處描述的是過去的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將drives改為drove。4.考查形容詞。句意:我太驚訝了,以至于撞到了一個在街上走的老太太身上。此處修飾主語I的感情,應(yīng)用-ed結(jié)尾形容詞。故將surprising改為surprised。5.考查非謂語動詞。句意:我太驚訝了,以至于撞到了一個在街上走的老太太身上。分析可知此處使用非謂語動詞作后置定語,walk與anoldlady是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系,表示主動,應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞形式,故將walk改為walking。6.考查副詞。句意:幸運的是,老太太沒有受傷,但我從自行車上摔了下來,落在一個洞里。此處修飾后面整句話的內(nèi)容,應(yīng)用副詞作狀語,故將Lucky改為Luckily。7.考查冠詞。句意:幸運的是,老太太沒有受傷,但我從自行車上摔了下來,落在一個洞里。此處泛指“一個洞”,應(yīng)用不定冠詞,hole是發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭的詞,應(yīng)用a。故將the改為a。8.考查固定搭配。句意:我的鄰居看到我摔倒了,就停下車沖出來幫我。seesbdosth.,看見某人做某事,fall前的to是多余的。故去掉to。9.考查代詞。句意:我的鄰居看到我摔倒了,就停下車沖出來幫我。根據(jù)語境可知,此處指鄰居沖過來幫“我”。故將her改為me。第26頁共26頁
10.考查連詞。句意:多么尷尬又危險的一天?。「鶕?jù)句意可知,此處不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,而是并列關(guān)系。故將but改為and。短文改錯(二)A(2021·河南省鄭州市高中畢業(yè)年級第二次質(zhì)量預(yù)測)Theotherdaythemembersofourschool’sEnglishclubtaketheexchangestudentsintheirschooltovisittheCityCulturalCenter.Duringthevisit,theyappreciatedlargepictureexhibitionofourrichlocalcultureandsomeuniqueformofourlocalarts.However,theywatchedavideoabouttheachievementswehadmadeinthepastfewcenturies.Theexchangestudentswereallamazedatourcolorculture,sayingthatthevisitwasreallyabigculturalfeastwiththem.Thevisitwasagreatlysuccessandtheywerequitesatisfiedwithit.Itwasnotonlyenrichedtheexchangestudents’life,butalsohelpedthemlearningmoreaboutChineseculture.【答案】 Theotherdaythemembersofourschool’sEnglishclubtheexchangestudentsinschooltovisittheCityCulturalCenter.Duringthevisit,theyappreciatedlargepictureexhibitionofourrichlocalcultureandsomeuniqueofourlocalarts.,theywatchedavideoabouttheachievementswehadmadeinthepastfewcenturies.Theexchangestudentswereallamazedatourculture,sayingthatthevisitwasreallyabigculturalfeastthem.Thevisitwasasuccessandtheywerequitesatisfiedwithit.Itwasnotonlyenrichedtheexchangestudents’life,butalsohelpedthemmoreaboutChineseculture.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。作者講述了學(xué)校英語俱樂部舉行的一次活動,豐富了交換生們的生活,弘揚了中國文化。1.考查動詞時態(tài)。句意:幾天前,我們學(xué)校英語俱樂部的成員們帶著我們學(xué)校的交換生參觀了城市文化中心。根據(jù)時間狀語Theotherday,并結(jié)合全文,本句謂語動詞take應(yīng)使用一般過去時態(tài)。故將take改為took。2.考查代詞。句意:幾天前,我們學(xué)校英語俱樂部的成員們帶著我們學(xué)校的交換生參觀了城市文化中心。根據(jù)語境ourschool’sEnglishclub可知,我們學(xué)校的英語俱樂部應(yīng)該帶領(lǐng)我們學(xué)校的交換生活動才對。故將their改為our。3.考查冠詞。句意:參觀期間,他們欣賞了一場展示我們豐富的地方文化和幾種獨特的地方藝術(shù)形式的大型圖片展。該句名詞pictureexhibition為可數(shù)名詞,英語俱樂部帶領(lǐng)交換生參觀了一場畫展。故在large前添加不定冠詞a。第26頁共26頁
4.考查名詞。句意:參觀期間,他們欣賞了一次我們豐富的地方文化和幾種獨特的地方藝術(shù)形式的大型圖片展。本句中form是可數(shù)名詞意為“形式”,根據(jù)前面形容詞some及后面arts可知,應(yīng)該是好幾種藝術(shù)形式,form應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將form改為forms。5.考查副詞。句意:此外,他們還觀看了一個關(guān)于我們在過去幾個世紀所取得的成就的視頻。銜接副詞however表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,而前面說帶領(lǐng)交換生看了展覽,后面說還看了一部視頻,應(yīng)該是遞增關(guān)系。故將However改為Besides/Furthermore/Also/Moreover/Additionally。6.考查形容詞。句意:交換生們都驚嘆于我們的豐富多彩的文化,表示這次參觀對他們來說是一場巨大的文化盛宴。本句并不是想要表達“顏色文化”而是要表示“豐富多彩的文化”,應(yīng)使用形容詞作定語修飾名詞culture。故將color改為colorful。7.考查介詞。句意:交換生們都驚嘆于我們的豐富多彩的文化,表示這次參觀對他們來說是一場巨大的文化盛宴。表示“對某人來說是一場盛宴”應(yīng)使用afeastto/forsb.。故將with改為to或for。8.考查形容詞。句意:這次參觀非常成功,他們對此非常滿意。修飾名詞success,應(yīng)使用形容詞作定語。故將greatly改為great。9.考查動詞語態(tài)。句意:這不僅豐富了交換生的生活,也幫助他們更多地了解中國文化。本句主語It指代這次參觀活動,謂語動詞enriched與主語主動關(guān)系,應(yīng)使用主動語態(tài)。故將was去掉。10.考查非謂語動詞。句意:這不僅豐富了交換生的生活,也幫助他們更多地了解中國文化。learn在句中作賓語補足語。表示“幫助某人做某事”應(yīng)使用helpsb.(to)dosth.。故將learning改為learn。B(2021·寧夏石嘴山市高考二模)WhenIwassmall,myparentssentmetoboardingschool.IfeltveryhomesickthatIcriedallthetime.LonelyanddepressingIfailedtocontinuestudyingthereandreturnedbackhome.Luckily,whenIwasinhighschool,Igetpopularamongmyclassmate.Once,ourschoolorganizedatwo-weekstayincountryside.Again,Iwasawayfromhome,withoutparents,withoutyummyfood,evenwithoutahotshower.Tomyhappy,everybodywascaringandeverythingmademefeelathome.Whatgreatthechangewas!Whenthetripwasover,myparentstoldme,“You’vealreadygrowingup!”IknowI’llbeawayandgoafteryourdreams,buthomewillalwaysremaininmyheart.【答案】 WhenIwassmall,myparentssentmetoboardingschool.IfelthomesickthatIcriedallthetime.LonelyandIfailedtocontinuestudyingthereandreturnedbackhome.Luckily,whenIwasinhighschool,Ipopularamongmy.Once,ourschoolorganizedatwo-weekstayincountryside.Again,Iwasawayfromhome,withoutparents,第26頁共26頁
withoutyummyfood,evenwithoutahotshower.Tomy,everybodywascaringandeverythingmademefeelathome.greatthechangewas!Whenthetripwasover,myparentstoldme,“You’vealreadyup!”IknowI’llbeawayandgoafterdreams,buthomewillalwaysremaininmyheart.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述作者變得獨立的一次經(jīng)歷,雖然會離開家去追求夢想,但家永遠在心里。1.考查固定搭配。句意:我非常想家,以至于我一直哭。此處是so...that...引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句,表示“如此……以至于……”。故將very改為so。2.考查形容詞。句意:感覺孤獨又沮喪,我沒能繼續(xù)在那學(xué)習(xí),回家了。此處是形容詞作狀語,主語為I,應(yīng)用depressed,表示“感到沮喪的”,depressing表示“令人沮喪的”,修飾物,不符合題意。故將depressing改為depressed。3.考查副詞。句意:感覺孤獨又沮喪,我沒能繼續(xù)在那學(xué)習(xí),回家了。return本身就有“返回”之意,back語義重復(fù)。故刪除back。4.考查時態(tài)。句意:幸運的是,讀高中時,我在同學(xué)中間很受歡迎。結(jié)合whenIwasinhighschool可知,此處是講述過去發(fā)生的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將get改為got。5.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意:幸運的是,讀高中時,我在同學(xué)中間很受歡迎。classmate是可數(shù)名詞,結(jié)合語境可知,此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)表泛指。故將classmate改為classmates。6.考查冠詞。句意:有一次,我們學(xué)校組織了一次為期兩周的鄉(xiāng)村旅行。inthecountryside在鄉(xiāng)村,固定用法。故在countryside前加the。7.考查名詞。句意:讓我高興的是,每個人都很關(guān)心我,一切都讓我感覺像在家里一樣。此處應(yīng)用名詞作賓語,happiness是不可數(shù)名詞,tomyhappiness令我高興的是。故將happy改為happiness。8.考查感嘆句。句意:變化真大!how和what均可引導(dǎo)感嘆句,how強調(diào)形容詞。what強調(diào)名詞,結(jié)合形容詞great可知,此處是how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句結(jié)構(gòu)“how+形容詞/副詞+主語+謂語”。故將What改為How。9.考查時態(tài)。句意:旅行結(jié)束時,我的父母告訴我:“你已經(jīng)長大了!”此處是現(xiàn)在完成時,應(yīng)用過去分詞。故將growing改為grown。10.考查代詞。句意:我知道我會離開,去追求我的夢想,但是家永遠留在我心中。結(jié)合語境可知,此處指“我的夢想”,應(yīng)用形容詞性物主代詞my。故將your改為my。C(2021·河南省鄭州市高中畢業(yè)年級第三次質(zhì)量預(yù)測)ThisweekItookpartinaknowledgecompetitionontheSilkRoadwasheldinourschool,whichgavemeagreatsenseforachievement.OnMonday,aposter,whichannouncedthecompetition,attractingmyattention.Iimmediatelysignupforit.Afewdayslater,Iparticipatedthefirstroundofthecompetition,adifficultwrittentest.Sincethereweremanycompetitors,I第26頁共26頁
succeededinenteringthefinal.Itwasheldthismorningandonthestageinthehall,Iansweredmostofthequestionsaccurate.Finally,Iwonout!WheninterviewingbytheschoolTVstation,Iexpressedmyproudinoursplendidculture.Thecompetitionnotonlybroadenedmyknowledgesbutalsoencouragedmetolearnmoreaboutourowncultureinthefuture.【答案】 ThisweekItookpartinaknowledgecompetitionontheSilkRoad或washeldinourschool,whichgavemeagreatsenseachievement.OnMonday,aposter,whichannouncedthecompetition,myattention.Iimmediatelyupforit.Afewdayslater,Iparticipatedthefirstroundofthecompetition,adifficultwrittentest.thereweremanycompetitors,Isucceededinenteringthefinal.Itwasheldthismorningandonthestageinthehall,Iansweredmostofthequestions.Finally,Iwonout!WhenbytheschoolTVstation,Iexpressedmyinoursplendidculture.Thecompetitionnotonlybroadenedmybutalsoencouragedmetolearnmoreaboutourowncultureinthefuture.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。作者參加了學(xué)校舉辦的關(guān)于絲綢之路的知識競賽,這給了作者很大的成就感,拓寬了作者的知識,也鼓勵作者在未來學(xué)習(xí)更多關(guān)于我們自己的文化。1.考查非謂語動詞或定語從句。句意:這周我參加了學(xué)校舉辦的關(guān)于絲綢之路的知識競賽,這給了我很大的成就感。動詞held和謂語動詞took之間沒有連詞,所以可用非謂語動詞或用定語從句。hold和邏輯主語competition構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系,且動作已完成,所以可用過去分詞作后置定語,因此可以去掉was。當用定語從句時,從句修飾competition,從句中缺少主語,所以可用關(guān)系代詞which或that。故去掉was或在was前加which/that。2.考查介詞和固定搭配。句意:這周我參加了學(xué)校舉辦的關(guān)于絲綢之路的知識競賽,這給了我很大的成就感。agoodsenseof意為“……感”,為固定搭配。故將for改為of。3.考查時態(tài)。句意:星期一,一張宣布比賽的海報吸引了我的注意。此處動詞attract是謂語動詞,且表示過去的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將attracting改為attracted。4.考查時態(tài)。句意:我立即報名參加。此處表示過去的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將sign改為signed。5.考查固定搭配和介詞。句意:幾天后,我參加了第一輪比賽,那是一場困難的筆試。participatein意為“參加”,為固定搭配。故在participated后加in。6.考查連詞。句意:盡管有很多競爭者,我還是成功地進入了決賽。前文“thereweremanycompetitors”和后文“Isucceededinenteringthefinal”第26頁共26頁
構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,所以此處為讓步狀語從句。所以應(yīng)用連詞though,although或while表示“盡管”。故將Since改為Though/Although/While。7.考查副詞。句意:今天上午在大廳的舞臺上,我準確地回答了大部分問題。修飾動詞answered應(yīng)用副詞。故將accurate改為accurately。8.考查省略句和非謂語動詞。句意:在接受學(xué)校電視臺采訪時,我表達了對我們燦爛文化的自豪。在when引導(dǎo)的省略句中,動詞interview意為“采訪”,和主語I構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系,所以應(yīng)用過去分詞。故將interviewing改為interviewed。9.考查名詞。句意:在接受學(xué)校電視臺采訪時,我表達了對我們燦爛文化的自豪。在動詞expressed后應(yīng)用名詞作賓語。名詞pride意為“驕傲”。故將proud改為pride。10.考查名詞。句意:這次比賽不僅拓寬了我的知識,也鼓勵我在未來學(xué)習(xí)更多關(guān)于我們自己的文化。knowledge意為“知識”,為不可數(shù)名詞,沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將knowledges改為knowledge。D(2021·河南六市高三一模)BecauseoftheCOVID-19pandemic,peoplearerequiredtowearingmasksonbusesinChina.However,oneday,IforgettowearonewhenIwasheadingforavitalexam.Whileboardingthebus,Istoppedbythedriver.RealizingwhatIwouldbelatefortheexam,Inearlyburstintotear.Justatthattime,anoldladyhandedmewithamask,tellingmenottoworry.Thankstohispreciousgift,Iwasfinalintimefortheexam.Notonlydoesthemaskshowourgreatqualitiestohelpeachotherinfaceofgreatdanger,butitalsorepresentedtheChinesepeople’sdeterminationtopreventbutcontrolthepandemic.【答案】 BecauseoftheCOVID-19pandemic,peoplearerequiredtomasksonbusesinChina.However,oneday,ItowearonewhenIwasheadingforavitalexam.Whileboardingthebus,Istoppedbythedriver.RealizingIwouldbelatefortheexam,Inearlyburstinto.Justatthattime,anoldladyhandedmewithamask,tellingmenottoworry.Thankstopreciousgift,Iwasintimefortheexam.Notonlydoesthemaskshowourgreatqualitiestohelpeachotherinfaceofgreatdanger,butitalsotheChinesepeople’sdeterminationtopreventcontrolthepandemic.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述作者在疫情期間由于沒有戴口罩而被司機攔住不讓上車,一位老太太給了他一個口罩,最終他及時趕上了考試。1.考查非謂語動詞。句意:由于新冠肺炎大流行,中國公共汽車上要求戴口罩。require第26頁共26頁
sb.todosth.為固定用法,意為“要求某人做某事”,空處需填動詞不定式作賓語補足語。故將wearing改為wear。2.考查動詞時態(tài)。句意:然而,有一天,我在去參加一個重要考試的路上忘記戴口罩了。根據(jù)時間狀語“oneday”可知,此處陳述過去發(fā)生的事情,使用一般過去時。故將forget改為forgot。3.考查被動語態(tài)。句意:上車時,我被司機攔住了。根據(jù)句意“被攔住”和“by”可知,I和stop為被動關(guān)系,且此處陳述過去發(fā)生的事情,使用一般過去時的被動語態(tài),主語為I,be動詞使用was。故在stopped前面加was。4.考查賓語從句。句意:意識到我考試要遲到了,我?guī)缀蹩蘖似饋?。此處引?dǎo)賓語從句,從句不缺成分,需用連接詞that引導(dǎo),也可將that省略。故將what改為that或者將what刪除。5.考查名詞。句意:意識到我考試要遲到了,我?guī)缀蹩蘖似饋?。burstintotears為固定短語,意為“大哭起來”。tear為可數(shù)名詞,此處使用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將tear改為tears。6.考查介詞。句意:就在這時,一位老婦人遞給我一個口罩,告訴我不要擔心。handsb.sth.為固定短語,意為“遞給某人某物”,with是多余的。故將with去掉。7.考查代詞。句意:多虧了她珍貴的禮物,我終于及時參加了考試。根據(jù)上文anoldlady此處應(yīng)用her代指。故將his改為her。8.考查副詞。句意:多虧了她珍貴的禮物,我終于及時參加了考試。此處需用副詞修飾整個句子,需用final的副詞形式finally。故將final改為finally。9.考查動詞時態(tài)和主謂一致。句意:戴口罩不僅體現(xiàn)了中國人民同舟共濟、守望相助的偉大精神,也體現(xiàn)了中國人民防控疫情的決心。根據(jù)上文“Notonlydoes”此處應(yīng)該時態(tài)一致用一般現(xiàn)在時,主語為it,謂語動詞使用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。故將represented改為represents。10.考查連詞。句意:戴口罩不僅體現(xiàn)了中國人民同舟共濟、守望相助的偉大精神,也體現(xiàn)了中國人民防控疫情的決心。此處prevent和control為并列關(guān)系,需用連詞and連接。故將but改為and。短文改錯(三)A(2021·江西省宜豐中學(xué)高三一模)IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijing2022WinterOlympicGamesisneeded.I’mwritingtoapplytothisposition.AsanativeofBeijing,IthinkitisaprivilegeanddutyformetoofferthebestvoluntaryservicetoourforeignguestsandmeanwhilepromotingChineseculture.IbelieveI’mequallytothejob.IhavegoodcommandofEnglishandI’mconfidentingivingplayersguidanceandhelpasrequiring.What’smore,Ihaveaknowledgeofwintersports,whichtheywillprovehelpfulincommunicatingwithplayers.However,Ihavebeeninvolvedinseveralinternationalexchangeprograms,butenjoyspreadingourculturetoforeigners.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetheopportunities.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yourssincerely,第26頁共26頁
LiHua【答案】 IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijing2022WinterOlympicGamesneeded.I’mwritingtoapplythisposition.AsanativeofBeijing,IthinkitisaprivilegeanddutyformetoofferthebestvoluntaryservicetoourforeignguestsandmeanwhileChineseculture.IbelieveI’mtothejob.IhavegoodcommandofEnglishandI’mconfidentingivingplayersguidanceandhelpas.What’smore,Ihaveaknowledgeofwintersports,whichtheywillprovehelpfulincommunicatingwithplayers.,Ihavebeeninvolvedinseveralinternationalexchangeprograms,enjoyspreadingourculturetoforeigners.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermethe.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】 本文是一封申請信。李華申請成為2022年冬奧會的志愿者。1.考查主謂一致。主語volunteers是復(fù)數(shù),謂語動詞用復(fù)數(shù),文章主時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。故將is改為are。2.考查介詞。applyto的意思是“適用于”;applyfor的意思是“申請”,此處表示“申請這個職位”。故將to改為for。3.考查非謂語動詞。Itis+n.+forsb.todosth.是固定搭配,這里用and連接兩個并列的動詞不定式,前面一個動詞不定式有to,后面一個省略to。故將promoting改為promote。4.考查形容詞。am是系動詞,接形容詞作表語,beequaltosth能夠勝任。故將equally改為equal。5.考查冠詞和固定短語。haveagoodcommandof是固定短語,表示“精通”。故在good前加a。6.考查狀語從句的省略。分析句子可知,此處是as(Iam)required的省略,當主句主語和從句主語一致,且從句謂語動詞有be時,從句主語和be可以省略,I和require是動賓關(guān)系,應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)。故將requiring改為required。7.考查代詞。which作主語,引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句,which指代主句,在從句中作主語,they多余。故將they去掉。第26頁共26頁
8.考查副詞。句意:此外,我有冬季運動的知識,這將證明有助于與球員溝通。前后文是遞進關(guān)系。故將However改為Besides/Morever/Furthermore/Additionally。9.考查連詞。句意:我還參與了一些國際交流項目,并喜歡向外國人傳播我們的文化。前后是并列關(guān)系。故將but改為and。10.考查名詞。此處特指上文提到的這一次機會,名詞用單數(shù)。故將opportunities改為opportunity。B(2021·安徽示范高中皖北協(xié)作區(qū)高三一模)DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?TherewillhaveanEnglishspeechcontestnextweek,thatIplantogetinvolvedin.SoI’mwritingtoyouforhelp.I,borninAnhuiandneverexposedtoEnglish-speakingcountries,havethepoorcommandofspeakingskillsinpublic.What’sworst,Iamafraidofmakinggrammaticalmistakeswhenitcomestodeliveraspeech.Muchtorelief,Icanseekyourhelp.Hopefully,youwillbekindenoughtohelpwithmypronounce.AreyouavailableinthisSaturday?Ifso,let’smetat9o’clockinourclassroom.Yourkindhelpwillbehighappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】 DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?will或anEnglishspeechcontestnextweek,Iplantogetinvolvedin.SoI’mwritingtoyouforhelp.I,borninAnhuiandneverexposedtoEnglish-speakingcountries,havepoorcommandofspeakingskillsinpublic.What’s,Iamafraidofmakinggrammaticalmistakeswhenitcomestoaspeech.Muchtorelief,Icanseekyourhelp.Hopefully,youwillbekindenoughtohelpwithmy.AreyouavailableinthisSaturday?Ifso,let’sat9o’clockinourclassroom.Yourkindhelpwillbeappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua第26頁共26頁
【解析】 這是一篇應(yīng)用文。作者即將參加英語演講比賽,希望能夠獲得朋友Peter的幫助。1.考查therebe結(jié)構(gòu)或主語判斷。句意:下周有一場英語演講比賽,我打算參加。therebe意為“有”,為固定句型,所以可將have改為be;如果用have作謂語,則應(yīng)用we作主語。故將There改為We或者將have改為be。2.考查定語從句。句意:下周有一場英語演講比賽,我打算參加。先行詞為contest,非限制性定語從句中缺少賓語,所以應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which,that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。故將that改為which。3.考查冠詞。句意:我出生在安徽,從未去過說英語的國家,在公共場合演講的技巧很差。haveacommandof意為“掌握”,且poor的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭。故將the改為a。4.考查比較級。句意:更糟糕的是,我在演講時很害怕犯語法錯誤。此處是跟在公共場合演講的技巧很差進行比較,表示“更糟糕的是”,應(yīng)用比較級。故將worst改為worse。5.考查非謂語動詞。句意:更糟糕的是,我在演講時很害怕犯語法錯誤。whenitcomesto中的to是介詞,應(yīng)用動名詞作賓語。故將deliver改為delivering。6.考查固定搭配。句意:令我寬慰的是,我可以向你尋求幫助。muchtoone’srelief意為“令某人非常寬慰的是”,為固定搭配。此處是指令“我”寬慰的是,所以應(yīng)用my。故在relief前加my。7.考查名詞。句意:希望你能好心幫我發(fā)音。在介詞with后應(yīng)用名詞作賓語。名詞pronunciation意為“發(fā)音”,表抽象意義,不可數(shù)。故pronounce改為pronunciation。8.考查介詞。句意:這周六你有空嗎?表示“這周六”應(yīng)用thisSaturday,不需要用介詞。故將in去掉。9.考查使役動詞的用法。句意:如果有空,我們9點在教室見面吧。let’sdosth.意為“讓我們做某事”,為固定搭配。故將met改為meet。10.考查副詞。句意:我將非常感謝你的幫助。修飾動詞appreciate應(yīng)用副詞。故將high改為highly。C(2021·河南省洛陽市高三年級第三次統(tǒng)一考試(三模))MygrandpalikesPekingOpera.Inthepast,IoftensawhimwatchinglotsofsuchprogramonTV.However,sincelastyear,hehadbeguntolearntosingPekingOperaonthephone.Whenhegotasmartphonesendbymyfather,Igottheideaforteachinghimhowtouseit.IinstructedhertoturnonthephoneandwatchedthevideosofPekingOpera.Atthefirst,hecouldnotfollowme,buthelistenedwithgreatcareful.Itaughthimpatientlyandhelearneduseitatlast.Nownotonlycanheenjoythevideos,andhecansingPekingOperawell.【答案】 MygrandpalikesPekingOpera.Inthepast,IoftensawhimwatchinglotsofsuchonTV.However,sincelastyear,hebeguntolearntosingPekingOperaonthephone.When第26頁共26頁
hegotasmartphonebymyfather,Igottheideateachinghimhowtouseit.IinstructedtoturnonthephoneandthevideosofPekingOpera.Atthefirst,hecouldnotfollowme,buthelistenedwithgreat.Itaughthimpatientlyandhelearneduseitatlast.Nownotonlycanheenjoythevideos,hecansingPekingOperawell.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。講述了作者教祖父在智能手機上看京劇視頻,學(xué)習(xí)京劇的故事。1.考查名詞。句意:在過去,我經(jīng)常看到他在電視上看很多這樣的節(jié)目。program為可數(shù)名詞,由lotsof修飾應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將program改為programs。2.考查動詞時態(tài)。句意:然而,從去年開始,他開始在手機里學(xué)習(xí)唱京劇。根據(jù)上文“sincelastyear”可知應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時,主語為he,助動詞用has。故將had改為has。3.考查非謂語動詞。句意:當他收到我父親寄來的智能手機時,我就有了教他如何使用智能手機的想法。此處為非謂語動詞作定語,send與smartphone構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系,應(yīng)用過去分詞作作后置定語。故將send改為sent。4.考查介詞。句意:當他收到我父親寄來的智能手機時,我就有了教他如何使用智能手機的想法。結(jié)合句意表示“……的想法”短語為theideaof。故將for改為of。5.考查代詞。句意:我指導(dǎo)他把手機打開,看京劇的視頻。此處指指導(dǎo)祖父,應(yīng)用代詞him。故將her改為him。6.考查固定短語。句意:我指導(dǎo)他把手機打開,看京劇的視頻。結(jié)合句意表示“指導(dǎo)某人做某事”短語為instructsb.todosth.,watch與turnon并列,且省去了其前的to應(yīng)用原形。故將watched改為watch。7.考查固定短語。句意:起初,他聽不懂我的話,但他聽得非常仔細。結(jié)合句意表示“起初”短語為atfirst。故去掉the。8.考查名詞。句意:起初,他聽不懂我的話,但他聽得非常仔細。此處作賓語,表示“仔細”應(yīng)用名詞care或carefulness。故將careful改為care/carefulness。9.考查固定短語。句意:我耐心地教他,他最終學(xué)會了使用它。結(jié)合句意表示“學(xué)會做某事”可知短語為learntodosth.。故在learned后添加to。10.考查固定短語。句意:現(xiàn)在他不僅能欣賞錄像,而且還能把京劇唱得很好。結(jié)合句意表示“不僅……而且……”可知并列連詞句式為notonly...but(also)...。故將and改為but。D(2021·云南省昆明市高三“三診一?!泵自\斷測試(二模))October12thwasbigdayformyteamandme.WetakepartinabasketballtournamentforseniorstudentsinLancasterCounty.Someplayerswereabsentbecausehehadtotakeexams.What’sworse,therewasnosubstitute.Theteamwhatweplayedagainstwaslastyear’stop第26頁共26頁
one.Asastriker,Iplayedhardly.Later,IhadlittleenergythanbeforeandgotinjuredbecauseofIfelldown.Duringthepause,thecoachtoldusto“playwitheffortbutwisdom”.Then,Isavedmystrengthandlookedforgoodchancestoscoringmoregoals.Finally,Iscoredanotherfourpointandwasnamedthe“mostvaluableplayer.”【答案】 October12thwasbigdayformyteamandme.WepartinabasketballtournamentforseniorstudentsinLancasterCounty.Someplayerswereabsentbecausehadtotakeexams.What’sworse,therewasnosubstitute.Theteamweplayedagainstwaslastyear’stopone.Asastriker,Iplayed.Later,IhadenergythanbeforeandgotinjuredbecauseofIfelldown.Duringthepause,thecoachtoldusto“playwitheffortwisdom”.Then,Isavedmystrengthandlookedforgoodchancestomoregoals.Finally,Iscoredanotherfourandwasnamedthe“mostvaluableplayer.”【解析】 本文是一篇記敘文。主要講述的是作者參加蘭開斯特縣高中生的籃球錦標賽所發(fā)生的事情。1.考查冠詞。句意:10月12日對我和我的團隊來說是個大日子。day此處為可數(shù)名詞單數(shù),表示泛指,應(yīng)在前面加不定冠詞,且big的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭。故在big前加a。2.考查時態(tài)。句意:我們參加了蘭開斯特縣高中生的籃球錦標賽。結(jié)合語境和上文時間狀語“October12th”,可知事情發(fā)生在過去,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將take改為took。3.考查代詞。句意:一些運動員缺席,因為他們要參加考試。分析可知,從句的主語應(yīng)和主句的“someplayers”對應(yīng),該詞為復(fù)數(shù),應(yīng)用they指代。故將he改為they。4.考查定語從句。句意:我們的對手是去年的第一名。分析可知,此處引導(dǎo)定語從句,先行詞為“theteam”,指物,在關(guān)系詞從句中充當against的賓語,應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which/that,又關(guān)系代詞作賓語可省。故將what改為which/that或者刪除what。5.考查副詞。句意:作為一名前鋒,我打得很努力?!癶ardly”意為“幾乎不”,不合題意;結(jié)合句意,此處表示打球很努力,應(yīng)用副詞hard修飾動詞played。故將hardly改為hard。6.考查形容詞。句意:后來,我的精力比以前少了,受傷了,因為我摔倒了。根據(jù)句中的“than”可知此處應(yīng)用比較級。故將little改為less。7.考查介詞。句意:后來,我的精力比以前少了,受傷了,因為我摔倒了?!癰ecauseof”后加名詞、代詞及動名詞?!癰ecause”后加從句,此處為because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。故將of去掉。第26頁共26頁
8.考查連詞。句意:在暫停的時候,教練告訴我們要用努力和智慧打球。結(jié)合句意,努力與智慧為并列關(guān)系。故將but改為and。9.考查非謂語動詞。句意:然后,我保存了我的力量,并尋找打進更多球的好機會。分析可知,此處應(yīng)用不定式作名詞chances的后置定語,goodchancestodosth.“做某事的好機會”。故將scoring改為score。10.考查名詞。句意:最后,我又得了四分,被評為最有價值球員。point為可數(shù)名詞,因前有four,故應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故point改為points。短文改錯(四)A(2021·四川省南充市高三下學(xué)期第三次適應(yīng)性考試)Ispentaunforgettablewintervacationthisyear,duringwhatIbecameanindependentlearner.Inthebeginningofthevacation,Imadeadetailedlearningplan.Withaclearaiminmymind,hewasalwaysinhighspiritseveryday.Tomydelighted,Icouldcarryouttheplanstrictly.WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,andIturnedtomyteachersandclassmatesforhelpthroughtheInternet.Thankstotheconvenientvideochatapp,Icouldgetmyproblemssolveintime.Gradual,Igainedmoreconfidenceinmyweaksubjects.Also,Ihadagreatsenseofaccomplishmentasmyindependentlearningabilitymastered.【答案】 Ispentunforgettablewintervacationthisyear,duringIbecameanindependentlearner.thebeginningofthevacation,Imadeadetailedlearningplan.Withaclearaiminmymind,wasalwaysinhighspiritseveryday.Tomy,Icouldcarryouttheplanstrictly.WheneverIwithdifficulties,andIturnedtomyteachersandclassmatesforhelpthroughtheInternet.Thankstotheconvenientvideochatapp,Icouldgetmyproblemsintime.,Igainedmoreconfidenceinmyweaksubjects.Also,Ihadagreatsenseofaccomplishmentasmyindependentlearningabilitymastered.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文?!拔摇倍冗^了一個難忘的寒假,在這期間我成為了一個獨立的學(xué)習(xí)者。1.考查冠詞。句意:我度過了一個難忘的寒假,在這期間我成為了一個獨立的學(xué)習(xí)者。unforgettable的開頭發(fā)音為元音,所以應(yīng)用不定冠詞an。故將a改為an。2.考查定語從句。句意:我度過了一個難忘的寒假,在這期間我成為了一個獨立的學(xué)習(xí)者。此處修飾wintervacation,應(yīng)為定語從句。非限制性定語從句中缺少介詞during的賓語,先行詞為wintervacation,所以應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which。故將what改為which。3.考查介詞和固定搭配。句意:在假期開始的時候,我制定了一個詳細的學(xué)習(xí)計劃。at第26頁共26頁
thebeginningof意為“在……開始的時候”,為固定搭配。故將In改為At。4.考查代詞。句意:在我心中有一個明確的目標,我每天總是精神亢奮。根據(jù)“Withaclearaiminmymind”可知,此處是指“我”每天總是精神亢奮。所以應(yīng)用人稱代詞I作主語。故將he改為I。5.考查名詞和固定搭配。句意:令我高興的是,我能嚴格執(zhí)行計劃。toone’sdelight意為“令某人高興的是”,為固定搭配。名詞delight意為“高興”,作介詞to的賓語。故將delighted改為delight。6.考查時態(tài)。句意:每當我遇到困難,我通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)向我的老師和同學(xué)尋求幫助。此處描述過去的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將meet改為met。7.考查連詞。句意:每當我遇到困難,我通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)向我的老師和同學(xué)尋求幫助。此處已有從屬連詞whenever作引導(dǎo)從句,所以不需要在一個句子中再用并列連詞and。故將and去掉。8.考查非謂語動詞。句意:多虧了這個方便的視頻聊天軟件,我可以及時解決我的問題。動詞solve意為“解決”,和邏輯主語problems構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系,且動作已完成,所以應(yīng)用過去分詞作賓語補足語。故將solve改為solved。9.考查副詞。句意:漸漸地,我對自己薄弱的科目有了更多的信心。修飾句子應(yīng)用副詞作狀語。故將Gradual改為Gradually。10.考查語態(tài)。句意:同時,我也很有成就感,因為我掌握了獨立學(xué)習(xí)的能力。在as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句中,master和主語ability構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系,表示被動應(yīng)用bemastered。此處描述過去的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時。主語ability為第三人稱單數(shù)。故在mastered前加was。B(2021·四川省達州市普通高中第二次診斷性測試)Michael,whonowstudiedinourschool,ismygoodfriend.OnthemorningoflastSaturdayheaskedmespendtheweekendtogetherwithhimself.Itwassuchfineweatherthatwehaddecidedtohangaroundinthetown.Therewerelotsofpeoplewalkhereandthere.Michaellookedinterestingineverythinghesaw.Threehourswentbybeforewebothfelthungrily,butalltherestaurantwerefullofguests.Toourexcitement,wewereabouttogiveupwhiletwoguestsroseandleft.Weimmediatelysatdownforourlunchandaboutanhourlaterwetookthetaxihome.【答案】 Michael,whonowinourschool,ismygoodfriend.OnthemorningoflastSaturdayheaskedmespendtheweekendtogetherwith.Itwassuchfineweatherthatwehaddecidedtohangaroundinthetown.Therewerelotsofpeoplehereandthere.Michaellookedineverythinghesaw.Threehourswentbybeforewebothfelt第26頁共26頁
,butallthewerefullofguests.Toourexcitement,wewereabouttogiveuptwoguestsroseandleft.Weimmediatelysatdownforourlunchandaboutanhourlaterwetooktaxihome.【解析】 本文是一篇記敘文。主要講了作者和好友邁克爾在城里度過周末的所見所聞。1.考查時態(tài)。句意:邁克爾現(xiàn)在在我們學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí),是我的好朋友。描述現(xiàn)狀,所以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。故將studied改為studies。2.考查非謂語動詞。句意:上周六上午,他邀請我和他一起過周末。asksb.todosth.邀請某人做某事。故在me后加to。3.考查代詞。句意:上周六上午,他邀請我和他一起過周末。表示我和他過周末,所以用賓格代詞作賓語。故將himself改為him。4.考查時態(tài)。句意:天氣這么好,我們決定在城里逛逛。描述過去的事情,而不是過去的過去,所以用一般過去時態(tài)。故去掉had。5.考查現(xiàn)在分詞。句意:有很多人在散步。walk和它所修飾的詞people之間是主動關(guān)系,所以用現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語。故將walk改為walking。6.考查形容詞。句意:邁克爾對他所看到的一切都顯得很感興趣。指人“感興趣的”,所以用interested,interesting指“有趣的”。故將interesting改為interested。7.考查形容詞。句意:三個小時過去了,我們都覺得餓了,但所有的餐廳都擠滿了客人。作表語,所以用形容詞。故將hungrily改為hungry。8.考查名詞。句意:三個小時過去了,我們都覺得餓了,但所有的餐廳都擠滿了客人。restaurant是可數(shù)名詞,前面有all,所以用復(fù)數(shù)名詞。故將restaurant改為restaurants。9.考查連詞。句意:令我們興奮的是,我們正要放棄時,這時兩位客人起身離開了?!皊b.wasdoingsth.when...”為固定句型,意為:某人正在做某事,這時……。故將while改為when。10.考查冠詞。句意:我們立即坐下來吃午飯,大約一個小時后,我們乘出租車回家了,泛指一輛車,所以用不定冠詞。故將the改為a。C(2021·黑龍江高三一模)DearDavid,Iwasexcitedtoknowyoulikemusicfromyourletter.NeitherdoI.Asweallknow,musicisanimportantpartofourlifetoday.Noonewillsaynotomusicandeverybodyhastheirtasteaboutthemusic.WhenIwasveryyoung,myparentswouldencouragemelistentoclassicmusic.Theywantedtodeveloptheirinterestandgoodtaste.SoasIgrowup,Ifallinloveforrockmusic,whichmakesmefeelcool.Itissaidthatmusiccanhealpeople’ssouls.Whilelisteningtosomepeacefulmusic,Iamsurprisingcalm.WhenIamnothappy,Iwilllistentomusicandthendancetoitinmybedroom.Musiccanhelpmeforgetsomethingannoyed.第26頁共26頁
It’sgreatthatwesharethesamehobbies.Musicisfullofcharm.CouldyouintroducesomeniceEnglishsongsinyournextletter?Yours,LiMing【答案】 DearDavid,Iexcitedtoknowyoulikemusicfromyourletter.doI.Asweallknow,musicisanimportantpartofourlifetoday.Noonewillsaynotomusicandeverybodyhastheirtasteaboutthemusic.WhenIwasveryyoung,myparentswouldencouragemelistentoclassicmusic.Theywantedtodevelopinterestandgoodtaste.asIgrowup,Ifallinloveforockmusic,whichmakesmefeelcool.Itissaidthatmusiccanhealpeople’ssouls.Whilelisteningtosomepeacefulmusic,Iamcalm.WhenIamnothappy,Iwilllistentomusicandthendancetoitinmybedroom.Musiccanhelpmeforgetsomething.It’sgreatthatwesharethesame.Musicisfullofcharm.CouldyouintroducesomeniceEnglishsongsinyournextletter?Yours,LiMing【解析】 這是一篇應(yīng)用文。作者在信中介紹了自己的業(yè)余愛好——音樂。1.考查時態(tài)。句意:我很激動從你的信中知道你喜歡音樂。我也是。根據(jù)句意可知,句子陳述的是客觀事實,應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時,句子主語為“I”,應(yīng)與am連用。故將was改為am。2.考查倒裝。句意:我很激動從你的信中知道你喜歡音樂。我也是。根據(jù)“Iamexcitedtoknowyoulikemusicfromyourletter.”可知,前句為肯定句,后句表示對前句中觀點的認同,應(yīng)用句型“so+助動詞/情態(tài)動詞/be動詞+主語”,意為“……也是”,用“neither+助動詞/情態(tài)動詞/be動詞+主語”時,上句應(yīng)為否定句。故將Neither改為So。3.考查冠詞。句意:沒有人會對音樂說不,每個人對音樂都有自己的品味。根據(jù)句意可知,句中“music”意為“音樂”,為不可數(shù)名詞,句中泛指音樂,不需要加定冠詞the。故將the刪除。4.考查非謂語動詞。句意:我很小的時候,父母會鼓勵我聽古典音樂。分析句子可知,句中涉及固定短語“encouragesb.todosth.”,意為“鼓勵某人做某事”。故在me后加to。第26頁共26頁
5.考查代詞。句意:他們想培養(yǎng)我的興趣和品味。但隨著我長大,我愛上了搖滾樂,它讓我覺得很酷。根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容可知,父母會鼓勵“我”聽古典音樂,由此可知,他們想培養(yǎng)“我的”興趣和品味,their意為“他/她/它們的”,不符合語境,my意為“我的”,為形容詞性物主代詞。故將their改為my。6.考查連詞。句意:他們想培養(yǎng)我的興趣和品味。但隨著我長大,我愛上了搖滾樂,它讓我覺得很酷。根據(jù)句意可知,文中“myparentswouldencouragemetolistentoclassicmusic”和“Ifallinlovewithrockmusic”為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,父母鼓勵我聽古典音樂,但我愛上了搖滾樂,故應(yīng)用連詞but連接上下文,表轉(zhuǎn)折,句首單詞首字母大寫。故將So改為But。7.考查介詞。句意:他們想培養(yǎng)我的興趣和品味。但隨著我長大,我愛上了搖滾樂,它讓我覺得很酷。分析句子可知,句中涉及固定短語“fallinlovewith...”,意為“愛上……”。故將for改為with。8.考查副詞。句意:在聽一些平靜的音樂時,我出乎意料地平靜。分析句子可知,句中“calm”,意為“平靜的”,形容詞詞性,前面應(yīng)用副詞修飾,surprising意為“令人吃驚的”,形容詞詞性,對應(yīng)的副詞為surprisingly,意為“出乎意料地”。故將surprising改為surprisingly。9.考查形容詞。句意:音樂可以幫助我忘記一些煩人的事情。分析句子可知,句中“something”為不定代詞,應(yīng)用形容詞作后置定語,annoyed意為“惱怒的”,形容詞詞性,修飾人,annoying意為“令人煩惱的”,形容詞詞詞性,修飾物,“something”意為“某事,某物”,應(yīng)用annoying修飾。故將annoyed改為annoying。10.考查名詞。句意:我們有相同的愛好真是太好了。根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容和句中“thesame”可知,句中特指一個相同的愛好,是上文提到的音樂,故應(yīng)用hobbies的單數(shù)形式為hobby,意為“業(yè)余愛好”,名詞詞性。故將hobbies改為hobby。D(2021·江西贛州市高三一模)Inordertocelebratetheeightyanniversaryofthefoundingofourschool,abigcelebrationwasheldinourschoollastSunday.Alltheteachersandstudentsattendedaceremony.Fullpreparationswerebeingmadeinadvance.Wedecorateourschoolwithflowersandballoons,butwepreparedsomeeye-catchingprograms.Finally,thedaywehadbeenlookingforwardcame.Inthemorning,theopeningceremonywasheldontheplaygroundasscheduling.Afterthat,theyattendedaspecialclassmeeting.Intheevening,theteachersandstudentsgavedifferentkindsofwonderfulperformance.IwashappilythatIjoinedinthechorusofourschoolsong.【答案】 Inordertocelebratetheanniversaryofthefoundingofourschool,abigcelebrationwasheldinourschoollastSunday.Alltheteachersandstudentsattendedceremony.第26頁共26頁
Fullpreparationswerebeingmadeinadvance.Weourschoolwithflowersandballoons,wepreparedsomeeye-catchingprograms.Finally,thedaywehadbeenlookingforwardcame.Inthemorning,theopeningceremonywasheldontheplaygroundas.Afterthat,attendedaspecialclassmeeting.Intheevening,theteachersandstudentsgavedifferentkindsofwonderful.IwasthatIjoinedinthechorusofourschoolsong.【解析】 這是一篇記敘文。為了慶祝學(xué)校建校80周年,上周日學(xué)校舉行了一場大型慶祝會。1.考查序數(shù)詞。句意:為了慶祝我們學(xué)校建校80周年,上周日我們學(xué)校舉行了一場大型慶祝會。表示“(第)……周年紀念日”應(yīng)用序數(shù)詞。故將eighty改為eightieth。2.考查冠詞。句意:所有的老師和學(xué)生都參加了儀式。前文中已經(jīng)提到了慶?;顒?,所以此處是特指。故將a改為the。3.考查時態(tài)。句意:所有的準備都提前做好了。此處是指準備都做好了,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將being去掉。4.考查時態(tài)。句意:我們用鮮花和氣球裝飾我們的學(xué)校,我們還準備了一些搶眼的節(jié)目。此處描述過去的事,應(yīng)用一般過去時。故將decorate改為decorated。5.考查連詞。句意:我們用鮮花和氣球裝飾我們的學(xué)校,我們還準備了一些搶眼的節(jié)目?!癢edecorateourschoolwithflowersandballoons”和“wepreparedsomeeye-catchingprograms”是并列關(guān)系,所以應(yīng)用連詞and。故將but改為and。6.考查介詞和固定搭配。句意:終于,我們盼望的日子到了。lookforwardto意為“期盼”,為固定搭配。故在forward后加to。7.考查過去分詞。句意:上午,開幕式如期在操場上舉行。as(itwas)scheduled意為“按照計劃”。故將scheduling改為scheduled。8.考查代詞。句意:之后,我們參加了一個特別班會。此處是指作者和老師同學(xué)們一起參加校慶活動,所以此處是指“我們”參加了一個特別班會。故將they改為we。9.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意:晚上,老師和同學(xué)們表演了各種各樣的精彩節(jié)目。根據(jù)“differentkindsof”可知,此處應(yīng)用可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。故將performance改為performances。10.考查形容詞。句意:我很高興我參加了校歌的合唱。在was后應(yīng)用形容詞作表語。故將happily改為happy。第26頁共26頁